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Hi all,

Ok, here’s the editing exercise to be completed upon your composition “Hope”:

1. Tenses: As this is either a narrative or personal recount, please make sure your verbs are in the PAST TENSE
2. Sentence Seperation: Ensure that your sentences are not like a train (with multiple commas)… at this level, you can have at max 2 commas, and probably 1 conjunction
3. Spelling: If unsure of certain words, circle it out and REPLACE it with a word you are confident of using and spelling Then check the dictionary for the spelling and definition of the original word you wanted to use

Let’s just edit these 3 areas for now Kindly tag your previous composition (vindictive) to your new essay and hand up to Aloysius on Monday Aloysius, please collect in registry order for me Thanks!

Have a great weekend guys!

Alex